Monday, 29 November 2010

heaven

heaven

5 comments:

The Bug said...

Oh! That last line just stabbed me in the heart - beautiful!

Enchanted Oak said...

"these moments / precious as prayer"

Fine line.

Roxana said...

ah, the romantic swiss reveals himself here :-P


wonderful

gospelwriter said...

Loved the pictures in the second stanza:

a turquoise sea at luskentyre
the rainbow’d arc of an atlantic wave
the first sight of a quetzal


So, something even more beautiful, more heavenly, than that... you.

Lovely.

Totalfeckineejit said...

That's a great love poem and they are so hard to do well. (Well for me they are!)