Monday, 8 November 2010

water poems

the sculls

8 comments:

Niamh B said...

lovely - I really like the silence drenching.

Marion McCready said...

really like 'bathed', love the first verse of it with wonderful words like verdigris and kaolin

swiss said...

thank you both. there was supposed ot be a sea poem to coplete a kind of water tryptych but it didn't make the deadline

Roxana said...

ophelia, ophelia!!! how could i resist that, especially between verdigris and kaolin :-)

swiss said...

i couldn;t resist a bit of self indulgence!

Peter Goulding said...

Just because it didn't make the deadline doesn't mean you shouldn't finish it. Lovely fluidity in these

swiss said...

handily enough the sea poem fitted for this week so it's the next one

Totalfeckineejit said...

Missed it. Bollix!