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apart from the first four lines, I really like this!
'into the bergamot haze of evening'
How cool is that?
yes, the first bit's had a fair bit of fiddling (and more to come) i need all the constituent bits in there to make thematic sense later on.
the bergamot haze came out of an argument about oranges of all things!
i agree with Totalfeckineejit about the bergamot line, wonderful!
but i have to admit that the sense of the whole escapes me, i know there are a lot of hidden references here but i am unable to get them :-)
it's not what i meant that really matters! lol
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