Sunday, 17 April 2011

april 17th

fathom

4 comments:

Roxana said...

that sea-change
the him into i
and of i
a father made

how wonderful, this poem echoing Ariel's song, i am thrilled with the masterful alliterations and yet the overall impression is that of natural simplicity, like a folk song...

Marion McCready said...

...I hear them, ding dong bell :)

Titus said...

And me.

swiss said...

these are tricky to get right but i was mostly happy with this one